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Another Dimension Chapter 1

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The rain trickled down in the glum alley and the sound of quick footsteps could be heard. A white unicorn with pink hair and green eyes galloped down the alley with a scared look on her face, occasionally looking back. A group of people wearing hoodies and sports jackets could be seen almost right behind her. They yelled after the frightened unicorn, some of them knocking over trash cans with their baseball bats on their way. The unicorn however outran them and hid behind a pile of garbage. The group ran past the pile and ran further down the alley. For a short while the unicorn calmed down and thought it was safe, but a hand quickly grabbed her by the tail and pulled her out. One of the people had stayed behind and grinned as he pulled her closer to him. As of instinct, the unicorn kicked him with both her hind legs, making him drop down on his knees with a painful grunt. The group however had heard the noise and ran back. The unicorn quickly dashed off down the alley, the rain trickling down her face. She bolted down between different alleys, but eventually found herself in a dead end.

She looked behind in terror as she saw the group slowly getting closer until they had formed a wall to close off the alley. The man who looked like the leader walked over to her and shook his head with a grin.
"You didn't think you were gonna get away from us, did you? We can't have a freak like you walk around as if you own the place"
The unicorn shook her head with a scared look on her face.
"P-Please! Don't hurt me! I-I'll get out of here right away!"
The group laughed together, some sliding their hands in under their jackets. The leader grabbed tightly around the unicorn's horn as he looked at her with a self satisfied gleam in his eyes.
"You don't understand freak. We're gonna end your life so you don't make that mistake another time"
The unicorn looked terrified at the leader, too scared to move even a single muscle. She was suddenly pushed down on the ground by two other people. She tried to move away, but they used their weight to hold her down. Another young man walked up to her, fiddling with a switchblade in his hand. He looked up and down her body until he saw something that caught his eyes. The tip of the knife gently slid up and down the g-note that was on her flank. The unicorn shook her head in terror.
"No! Don't do it!"
The young man smiled to himself and a slow movement slid the knife over her cutiemark, from the top of it and down to her knee. The blood ran from the open wound and the unicorn screamed in pain, tears welling up in her eyes. When he was down he looked on the other side and saw that there was another cutiemark. His grin widened as he let the blade cut through her cutiemark. The unicorn screamed more, trying to break free and tears running down her face, as he finished with the blade.

The group laughed loudly and looked down at her as if she was only living for their entertainment. The leader pushed the young man away and snarled at him.
"Don't just let it off like that. Make it suffer!" He shouted as he took the knife and plunged it deep into her flank. The unicorn twitched heavily in pain and screamed loudly, only to let it be followed with a painful sobbing. The group cheered on the leader who looked around in pride. The unicorn looked around in the alley, seeing some curtains being pulled down so they didn't see any of the violence happening down in the alley. The knife was suddenly pulled out quickly, making the unicorn yelp in pain, and the two guys that held her down suddenly pulled her up so she was sitting down, a painful shock going through her body as she sat down on her cut open flanks. The leader came back with a black box with small metal sticks sticking out from the top. He pushed on a button on the box and small sparks appeared between the two sticks. Without a warning he pushed it against the white unicorn's body and the two guys let go as the leader pushed the button. A strong electric jolt ran through her body and she screamed in pain, but the electricity made her muscles clamp together as she curled up in a ball on the ground. The leader finally let go of the button and stepped back to see what he had done on the unicorn.

She twitched occasionally and frowned sadly as she closed her eyes. One of the people from the group looked down on the ground and saw a small puddle at the unicorn's hind legs.
"Ey look! That freak just pissed itself!"
The unicorn gritted her teeth together and sobbed under their collected laughs, but the leader yelled out.
"SHUT UP!......Give me the bat..."
The group looked nervous at the leader, one of them throwing his metal bat over to him. The two guys from before pulled the unicorn up and spread her hind legs as ordered by the leader. The unicorn looked scared at them, but stopped moving as she saw the leader towering over her with the bat in his hand. He grinned to himself as he held the bat over his head, only to smash it down on the unicorn's left hind leg. The sound of the metal hitting a hard spot and bones cracking could be heard just before the unicorn let out a painful scream and moved around in pain. The leader ordered one of the guys to hold her still and looked satisfied at the unicorn who was crying heavily and looked terrified at him.
"Please.....No more....."
The leader gently pushed the bat against her head and smirked.
"No way freak! You're mine!"

He took a stance and held the bat over his head again and send it crashing down on her right hind leg this time. The same bone cracking sound could be heard and she screamed in pain yet again as the others laughed and cheered. The unicorn kept screaming in pain and wiggled around as the tears kept flowing down her face.
"SHUT THE FUCK UP!"
The leader looked irritated at her and swung the bat, hitting her on the side of her head, sending her falling down on the ground. The hit made the unicorn's ears ring heavily and her vision became blurry. She couldn't feel the pain anymore, but she began seeing red one of her eyes as blood slowly flowed down over it. All she could hear was the ringing tone and muffled sounds and she could only see blurry shapes moving around. She looked at where the leader had last been and saw a shape holding something above it as it slowly came down towards her face.
This is one of my older works that is the first chapter of a longer and more intrigue story that I thought about.

It will be following several of the cast from MLP, but right now it will follow my OC Lyniv from the start as she walks around in this weird new place.
© 2012 - 2024 LynivtheAuthor
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Spetsnaz-Marksman's avatar
Oh GREAT. I made the mistake of reading this! This just fuckin pisses me off. Thanks.